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Spooky and visceral, this story made me very aware of the fact that I used to live like an hour away from Jacob's Well and also that I'm terrified of caves (let alone underwater caves!) Genuinely got chills from me. The writing style created such a to-the-point scary atmosphere that suited the location really well!

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Great! The writing is very claustrophobic. I think 'a camera stuck recording hours and hours of darkness' is my favourite image.